Coloring Experiment

UPDATE: I'm doing two pages of colored requests and then no more color for a while; Anyone wanting a say on what's on those pages had better hurry to my journal.

This is probably the... third time I've tried coloring anything in photoshop, and now I remember why I don't do it very often: It's difficult, boring, and my mouse is jerky. Color adds a lot, but it takes a lot too.

[link] This is the original image; I REALLY should have erased the pencil lines after I inked it.

Comments and critique are especially welcome on this one.